Tuesday 6 July 2021

My Opinion...

In kereru we have been looking at persuasive writing. we have a topic that we can chose agree or disagree on. 







our topic was:  kids should get more responsibilities.  (I agree)


I agree kids should get more responsibilities  because it is easier to learn when your younger then it is when we are older. they will learn good habits for when they are older. kids will learn simple chores like putting their own washing away,  making their own bed and washing the dishes. kids would know how to do everything when they are older because they already know how to do it all. kids spend a lot of time on a device and they will be busy doing chores and jobs. being busy is a good thing. I agree kids should be given the value responsibility because kids will make more friends because they have good value, and will help them, when they need it.  



2 comments:

  1. Hi Celeste - that is a great piece of persuasive writing, some very good ideas especially the bit about having good values! I bet you are a big help to your Mum at home.

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  2. Sorry Celeste - I meant to mention that I am helping Mrs Taqea during lockdown with having a read of your blogs. I would love to read more of your blogs, you could write one about one particular day during life in lockdown? : )

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My Opinion...

In kereru we have been looking at persuasive writing. we have a topic that we can chose agree or disagree on.  our topic was:  kids should g...