My Opinion...

In kereru we have been looking at persuasive writing. we have a topic that we can chose agree or disagree on. 

our topic was:  kids should get more responsibilities.  (I agree)

I agree kids should get more responsibilities  because it is easier to learn when your younger then it is when we are older. they will learn good habits for when they are older. kids will learn simple chores like putting their own washing away,  making their own bed and washing the dishes. kids would know how to do everything when they are older because they already know how to do it all. kids spend a lot of time on a device and they will be busy doing chores and jobs. being busy is a good thing. I agree kids should be given the value responsibility because kids will make more friends because they have good value, and will help them, when they need it.  

My pest control poster

       WALT: learn what pests are, and add detail.

On Friday the 18th of June 2021 I made on google draw  a poster about bad pests and created an advertisement about it. we tried to make it as detailed as possible. this is how mine turned out:

                                 

did you learn anything from this poster?

My flow chart

  this is a flow chart of how to make an umu.

in literacy we are looking at umu.  We learned how umu is similar to hangi. we even had an umu at school down the bottom field. an Umu is a Samoan food tradition, and Samoan people say, if you make an umu you need too share it with your neighbours. 

                                                                                                                                                             

show don't tell

I am small with pointy ears. I've got four small paws and a thin tail. I've got a little nose and whiskers that feel like fishing line. I feel like a ball of yarn. I like to catch and play with fish, mice, and birds. and I've got sharp claws and teeth to catch them with.

who am I?

my special persen

  WALT: write about a special persen in the school.

my special persen is Elise.she is my cousin. she is kind,thouthful and funny. she has a highlight colour hair . her skin is very bright. her voice is very low. and she mostly has her hair tied up. she is always chearful and she stays sweet. she is a good freind and she make 's me laugh. I know she is freindly and joyful.

writing sample

16.6.2020

we all know that earth is the only planet we can live on right? but why? well on one side of mercury its to hot on the other its to cold. there's no water or food not even grass! on venus there's no air ether to hot no water or food. on mars its to cold very rocky no water or food or air. theres a posenus gas covering Jupiter .no water no food no air nothing. saturn is different to the others.because there are rings made of rock and ice.and same as the others no air no water or food. on uranus it rains diominds and no food or water or air or grass.on neptune its to cold no air water or food. we can live on earth because theres oxygen to brethe and water and food its not to hot not to cold.

the discovery of pluto

In  1930  a man named clyde  discovered a planet that he named pluto the man new it orbited around the sun. and it was round but it did'int clear it's orbit.so it is not a planet it is a dawaf  planet.
There are 4 dawaf planets in our soler system.